tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post5715955241398166799..comments2024-02-28T18:29:41.120-08:00Comments on Not of General Interest: Bad professor, good professorundinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589384016564587214noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-355233312395553162007-12-25T20:52:00.000-08:002007-12-25T20:52:00.000-08:00Oh dear. I'm the Bad TA. From an e-mail sent to ...Oh dear. I'm the Bad TA. From an e-mail sent to me by a student:<BR/><BR/>"I was disappointed that I did not receive the same level insight in the evaluation of my final paper. There was only one comment on Page 2, which read 'confused.'"<BR/><BR/>(But it WAS confused!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-47548438362408559742007-12-21T08:42:00.000-08:002007-12-21T08:42:00.000-08:00heu mihi, I tried out that phrase aloud, emphasizi...heu mihi, I tried out that phrase aloud, emphasizing different words each time, and you're right: it's all in the intonation. Virgil influenced Dante? You don't say :-)!<BR/><BR/>ahistoricality, I sometimes wonder if they think that if the index doesn't cover it, it's not important.<BR/><BR/>lynn: maybe drivel to you now, but think how it might have looked in comparison with the OTHER papers that the GA got.<BR/><BR/>techsophist, that's a good way to get them to read the headnote. Why on earth wouldn't they do that if they're writing a paper on the person?<BR/><BR/>anonymous, I think that is all the bad/good professor idea in a nutshell.undinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589384016564587214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-84996257994148285982007-12-20T13:06:00.000-08:002007-12-20T13:06:00.000-08:00Bad professor thinks: "So?" Good professor writes:...Bad professor thinks: "So?" <BR/>Good professor writes: "And?"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-40586615392399979792007-12-20T05:21:00.000-08:002007-12-20T05:21:00.000-08:00Bad professor thinks: How on earth can anyone call...Bad professor thinks: How on earth can anyone call bell hooks "he" and argue from the point that "he" can't say such things because they are politically incorrect?<BR/>Good professor writes: The bio for the article gives good information about the writer, her background. and how much authority she has in her specialty. It's always a good idea to read it.<BR/><BR/>Tone is so important. Because we work with words every day, we can get caught up in an especially good piece of wordplay that uses irony or sarcasm. The trick is to see real people on the other side of that page, not faceless students. Real people deserve helpful comments.Lanette Cadlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15558736674034683348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-77933012395404187822007-12-17T09:21:00.000-08:002007-12-17T09:21:00.000-08:00Dance--ah yes, voice! Too much or the wrong kind, ...Dance--ah yes, voice! Too much or the wrong kind, and you get what st. eph is talking about; too little, and it's what you describe. St. Eph, great translation! On the last example: sometimes I think my students have studied with a 19th-century book reviewer because I get so much of this praise-for-the-author stuff. I try to tell them that the world has already decided that Charles Dickens is a pretty good writer; that's not an argument that they need to spend a lot of time on in their papers.undinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589384016564587214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-1853250866853297392007-12-17T07:14:00.000-08:002007-12-17T07:14:00.000-08:00This post reminds me of one of my finals paper in ...This post reminds me of one of my finals paper in grad school. I am now able to imagine -<BR/> <BR/>Bad GA thinks: What drivel, blah, blah, blah<BR/><BR/>Good GA thinks: Well written, good research topic, paper lacks focus<BR/><BR/>The good GA won, I got a B+ accompanied the Good GA comments. Though I still wonder how drivel gets a B+ (and yes, it was drivel).Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12650269085247234206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-56128957707118078612007-12-17T02:47:00.000-08:002007-12-17T02:47:00.000-08:00Bad Professor thinks: Now that you've repeated all...Bad Professor thinks: Now that you've repeated all the textbook pages that are indicated in the index, did you learn anything?<BR/>Good professor writes: Some good points, but lacks depth.Ahistoricalityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04004964192885891003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-76847067853475494152007-12-14T13:48:00.000-08:002007-12-14T13:48:00.000-08:00My comments all just sound snarky in my head but c...My comments all just sound snarky in my head but come out (I hope) more neutrally. The following sentence, for example, can be read with a variety of inflexions.<BR/><BR/>"What exactly are you arguing here?"<BR/><BR/>In keeping with the post, however, here's one that keeps coming up.<BR/><BR/>Bad professor thinks: If I have to read one more paper that "argues" that Virgil influenced Dante--the most obvious fucking point in the world, motherfucker--I will bite through my keyboard.<BR/><BR/>Good professor writes: You quite accurately point out that Virgil influenced Dante's composition of the DC. Now consider the implications of that influence. Why is it significant? How does it help us to understand Dante's text?heu mihihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08529298049179816825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-48799301761659824492007-12-14T11:26:00.000-08:002007-12-14T11:26:00.000-08:00Yeah...if I had to constantly grade papers like th...Yeah...if I had to constantly grade papers like the ones I used to hand in...*shudders*...I'd be Bad Professor more often than not!Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01477707480338232435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-4065343479569860062007-12-14T07:49:00.000-08:002007-12-14T07:49:00.000-08:00Amanda, a lot of times those don't mean any more t...Amanda, a lot of times those don't mean any more than what the Good Professor side says, but every once in a while the Bad Professor thoughts do kick in.undinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05589384016564587214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-86780866613705167962007-12-14T06:10:00.000-08:002007-12-14T06:10:00.000-08:00Wow. I just flashed back to all the comments I go...Wow. I just flashed back to all the comments I got on my papers during my first attempt at college. I wish my professors had written what they really meant. I'd probably be a much better writer...Amandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01477707480338232435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-8243233925080057252007-12-13T22:38:00.000-08:002007-12-13T22:38:00.000-08:00And, on the flip side:Bad professor thinks: Dear l...And, on the flip side:<BR/><BR/>Bad professor thinks: Dear lord, you sound like a gum-smacking 12-year-old talking on a cell phone on a city bus.<BR/>Good professor writes: Establishing a more serious academic tone in your writing would help support your argumentative authority.<BR/><BR/>Great examples! I especially like the last one.St. Ephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11611680292576283192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22001031.post-56850422346154324942007-12-13T19:40:00.000-08:002007-12-13T19:40:00.000-08:00Bad professor thinks: jeez, does your writing have...Bad professor thinks: jeez, does your writing have to be so boring?<BR/>good professor writes: it's okay to let your personality show, even in academic writing.<BR/><BR/>Superb idea!dancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05560093455630610783noreply@blogger.com